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Post by lightbaron on Dec 2, 2013 10:42:37 GMT -5
dawns best star sets its burden on espionage blinding divinity's spies truth spares no witness but amplifies its testimony before being entombed by name call forth confusion wording a way out from the collapsed mass of knowing express the exponent of being by spelling gods name in kaleidoscope saying it backwards, in split tongues dawns burden dispels into the ecstasy of forgetting yesterday
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Post by Bastet on Dec 2, 2013 19:53:31 GMT -5
S4 is beautiful. I even think I "get it". But the rest just seems like a pretty wird bomb went off and I have no idea what the title means or how to tie it in. I'll be picking Google's brain tonight.
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Post by lightbaron on Dec 4, 2013 8:05:20 GMT -5
the title just sounded nice to me...and was the initial opening line.........the short of it, is a communion with "god" (f*ck I hate that term, but the generic ness of it can become something on its own) via psychedelics aka entheogen -( that term meaning to generate the divine within the individual)
also some misunderstood gnosis seeking...aka Jah Lucifari, or light bearing
thank you for reading and commenting
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Post by lightbaron on Dec 4, 2013 9:29:27 GMT -5
was my f*ck just edited?
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Post by lightbaron on Dec 4, 2013 9:29:37 GMT -5
guess so
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siksimon
Demon Disciple
Blind leading the blind.
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Post by siksimon on Dec 4, 2013 11:17:11 GMT -5
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Post by Bastet on Dec 4, 2013 12:46:47 GMT -5
Oh hey, thanks for the information I'm still learning and spirituality ( especially advanced stuff) isn't my strong suit. Yet. I'll get there. ProBoards automatically edits certain words. It isn't the mods.
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Post by twistedangel on Dec 4, 2013 13:28:17 GMT -5
after googling 'entheogenic' i reckon the titles pretty clever once upon a time when i used to go raving high on ecstasy an speed..with the music an the lights..is the closest thing i can say i ever got to a 'spiritual nirvana' BUT as it wos drug induced i guess it wos totally fake an i think thats wot am taking away with this write as well
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Post by Aish on Dec 14, 2013 23:34:10 GMT -5
Angel, drug induced doesn't necessarily equal fake. Some drugs are specifically there for spiritual awakening. LB, this is beautiful. "Split tongues" gives in to so many nuances, it's making me very happy.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Dec 15, 2013 0:41:21 GMT -5
Awesome write Lightbaron and welcome to Dark Star It’s cerebral, thought provoking, clever, and despite its complexity it’s poetic. Somehow you leave just enough to the reader’s interpretation that it has a mysterious beauty in that I’m not quite sure of the writer’s intent. Eg; “into the ecstasy of forgetting yesterday” This is thrice the profound ending in its multiple meanings. Quite an involving read, captivating. Dare I say, enrapturing? (pun intended) LOL The opening gave me chills. Awesome, thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading more.
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