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Post by lightbaron on Nov 21, 2013 18:05:52 GMT -5
she says there's too many cogs behind the face that gets peeled
i mention future primitive and tell her that now has always been a machine
the oldest promises matter most, the rest can't handle the stress of time
i agree that my carbon engine is best suited for the asphalt laid on the outer circles but the inner tendrils that excite themselves to spiral still speak to the singe and shine of diamond
we are too young to assume how subtle our bodies must sit
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Post by Aish on Nov 23, 2013 18:37:46 GMT -5
Did you intend to use 'pealed' in S1 L2? Or 'peeled'?
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Post by lightbaron on Nov 23, 2013 19:14:08 GMT -5
I did mean "peel" although the latter could have worked. But thank you kindly, I edited that
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Post by Bastet on Nov 23, 2013 21:39:46 GMT -5
Easy ripples, concentric and at the same time expanding. There are layers I think I still need to peel (haha), but this is special in a way I can't articulate yet.
Thanks for sharing, LightBaron.
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Post by nibbana on Nov 26, 2013 2:56:06 GMT -5
now has always been a machine
the oldest promises matter most
Such intelligent piece. Many things come to mind, but ancient promises and models, we are as we have always been. Spiritual conforms or rebels, but man animal always the same. What is old and bloodied stone still stands, the new washes away as sand.
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Post by Aish on Nov 27, 2013 4:10:06 GMT -5
My friend, you sit in the center of the star tetrahedron and grin at the rotation, don't you?
S3 through S4L1 are the sneaky snacky equivalent ( in my head, anyway) of carbon dating this experience we all share. I am way envious of the way you work. This piece makes me smile every time I read it, and I do apologize for the delay in response.
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