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Post by windfog on Dec 6, 2012 0:33:37 GMT -5
Rain-centipede Soaked its thin feet Into the street's puddles.
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Post by Aish on Feb 24, 2013 9:35:01 GMT -5
Ris, My new favorite from you. Very grand. I love rainy days.
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mic2
Crimson Soul
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Post by mic2 on Mar 12, 2013 21:23:35 GMT -5
Rain-centipede Soaks thin feet In street puddles.
or
Rain-centipede Soaks feet In puddles.
Maybe this--or better. Condensed.
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Post by windfog on Mar 13, 2013 11:05:20 GMT -5
Lady - thank you so much! Mic! - thank you so much too! Maybe you are right. W.F.
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