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soul
Jul 28, 2012 2:22:41 GMT -5
Post by Aish on Jul 28, 2012 2:22:41 GMT -5
small child
come out of your wretched cocoon,
tangled and hungry
in my hair.
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mic2
Crimson Soul
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soul
Jul 28, 2012 15:14:09 GMT -5
Post by mic2 on Jul 28, 2012 15:14:09 GMT -5
Well, I don't know what this is all about (this section) but this is a great start to something, Aish.
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soul
Jul 28, 2012 16:36:36 GMT -5
Post by Aish on Jul 28, 2012 16:36:36 GMT -5
Hey, Mike! When I dropped it, it felt like a beginning, but then I couldn't develop it further. Is this the piece you were referring to in your comment for Dipsomaniac? If so, I think I can kind of see what you meant. I will give some serious thought to these two pieces today and come back to them. Thank you, as always, for your input.
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