|
Post by Mikepoet on Jul 14, 2012 20:19:12 GMT -5
Contiguous ramblings of insanity as seen in computer lounge everyday. Mixed with lucid moments of humanity philosophies gleam with attention paid.
A grip on life or so it seems relates to those in 1st person, me. Creations of strife some say a dream familiar is blithe when constant in stream.
One must choose to become better.
|
|
|
Post by LonelyForsaken on Jul 14, 2012 20:39:36 GMT -5
I like it mike though it screams for a comma here; “person, me.” And more capitalization.
I see you’ve been spending more time online eh? LOL I shared a bunch of your Facebook stuff. Good stuff. You’re on fire. :-)
|
|
|
Post by Mikepoet on Jul 15, 2012 2:42:39 GMT -5
Thanks Ed. Will fix it to your advice before long. You have more of an understanding admittedly. All I can do is rhyme. You had some good stuff too on Facebook. Shared much of it. The majority of those women who like and copy and all that are my Sisters Cousins Neices and well thats it. The best ones I get though inso far as pics go are shared from Kerri. All the naughty ones I put are from her lol. OK got it how is that?
|
|