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Post by Mikepoet on Feb 27, 2012 18:34:11 GMT -5
Hey little Princess where have you been. Did you wish upon a Star or listen to the wind. Come whisper in the ear of a new found Friend the dreams you've dreamed again and again.
Your life is portraid in Innocent pretend unreal unknowing but sweet to the end. Fantasy contained a kiss is a sin keep it all inside your heart won't mend.
Little princes Mafia princes.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Feb 27, 2012 23:24:16 GMT -5
It is cute Mike. And good. I think it flows better if you break up more. Eg; "Fantasy contained a kiss is a sin. Keep it all inside your heart won't mend."
I think "port raid" should be "portrayed" - big difference. :-)
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Post by Mikepoet on Feb 29, 2012 21:12:11 GMT -5
This was inspired by a young female not even a teenager yet. She would not acknoledge what her father did. She was the sweetest little young Lady. Catholic school girl. Christian to the t. She was the epitome of a Lady. Well a gonna be Lady. I wrote the first draft about 20 yrs ago so have not seen her in maby 5 yrs. I hope she is happy and will always be happy.
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