|
Post by RisYerg on Dec 17, 2011 3:58:35 GMT -5
A wind, silky wheedler, Tries to kiss a mistress of shadows. Silvery laugh.
|
|
|
Post by Aish on Dec 19, 2011 21:42:37 GMT -5
LOVE!!!!
(Crappy crit, I know.) But it's damned lovely and I am partial to the whole 3 lines.
|
|
|
Post by RisYerg on Jan 13, 2012 1:53:34 GMT -5
Many, many "thanks", lady! R.Y.
|
|
|
Post by LonelyForsaken on Jan 13, 2012 21:23:19 GMT -5
I agree with Chrys’s critic but I would like to add this as well; I have a silver bell in the shape of an angel. She has a heart of opal and a silvery laugh. I have many bells but Sarah is the only one I have given a name.
|
|
|
Post by atomicparakeet on Apr 2, 2012 1:25:58 GMT -5
Ris, this is lovely! I can feel the breeze!
|
|
|
Post by shamefulsean on Apr 8, 2012 20:16:06 GMT -5
i dont like short poems......but i like trying to kiss the mistress of shadows. neat work shame
|
|