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Post by RisYerg on Nov 28, 2011 6:52:39 GMT -5
Created by a cold, Heartless cloud Negligible, tender lie. A white and innocent Perfection.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2011 22:56:30 GMT -5
This is great. I don't know how you can write like this. Very few lines, but it explains everything.
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Post by RisYerg on Nov 29, 2011 2:16:49 GMT -5
Thank you so much! R.Y.
PS. I don't know too ... Alas.
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Post by Aish on Dec 1, 2011 1:27:36 GMT -5
Tonight I can smell snow in the air - this is the perfect thing to read as I wait for my hot cocoa.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Dec 1, 2011 1:46:26 GMT -5
I like the poem though I’m lost at the reference to a lie. I love the ending.
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