skyler
Dark Initiate
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plague
Aug 31, 2011 11:32:09 GMT -5
Post by skyler on Aug 31, 2011 11:32:09 GMT -5
the city told lies we never knew why at the time of the plague the motive was vague they made us slaves in their colonization play nothings the same. everything will change.
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plague
Aug 31, 2011 13:25:23 GMT -5
Post by Aish on Aug 31, 2011 13:25:23 GMT -5
Not only were the cities motives vague, so is this piece of writing. Vague and bland.
You have used no capitalization. Which city? What kind of lies? What kind of plague? What were the ramifications? What changed?
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