BloodTrails
Dark Initiate
-- Stuck on grins --
Posts: 50
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Is This
Feb 20, 2010 11:51:24 GMT -5
Post by BloodTrails on Feb 20, 2010 11:51:24 GMT -5
Is this
I'm there and dare to care for sane, -don't panic- Stop. So cold So new So bold So cruel This mold That chews My world And brews My Hate - Can't save My Dreams i Crave For Screams To make This real This thing - Surreal - That eats of fear And sits On shear mind.
I may be a - Freak i might be too - Weak i could see too - Thick but Dare me Not ! don't start To think That's far to sink this car 'of-the-sane' Don't blame me for being honest, Blame the Mirror Man !
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Anita
Demon Disciple
Take The Hurt To The Core Of My Heart and Feel it Bleeding, Pounding,Coming Apart.
Posts: 327
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Is This
Mar 10, 2010 16:59:45 GMT -5
Post by Anita on Mar 10, 2010 16:59:45 GMT -5
I've always enjoyed your wordplay, you really have a gift there ! Of course ending it like you did is something I always expect and still you get me every time! Awesome write !
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BloodTrails
Dark Initiate
-- Stuck on grins --
Posts: 50
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Post by BloodTrails on Apr 9, 2010 4:33:39 GMT -5
Thank you Anita , hope to see you soon around here .
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Is This
Jun 16, 2010 0:05:44 GMT -5
Post by 2standalone on Jun 16, 2010 0:05:44 GMT -5
I enjoyed this. very nicely done.
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