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Post by rustlee on Jul 23, 2008 3:28:51 GMT -5
Inexplicable spite of despondence reluctant on it's entirety To phantom or left it void the mirrored days of stolidness Forsakes cries and craves dreams melted flooded on the lake of blood bathing and staring the source of sin Ego masking impetuous savagery
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 23, 2008 19:59:35 GMT -5
Youre trying too hard with the vocab, rustlee.. It doesnt feel natural at all. There are bits that dont make sense as well..
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