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Post by gothate90 on Mar 12, 2008 18:46:30 GMT -5
i wrote this in science. its a lil f*ck u from me... wrote it quickly so not that good...
I hate you Mr. Valentines Your day of love but really lies You give red hearts, just take mine back For this one will always be painted black Couples cuddle, but hear the singles cries For this I hate you Mr. Valentines And as for roses, may the thorns be red And as for letters, their gonna shred Your cupids arrows had pierced my heart But the healing of my wound will not start So f*ck you Mr. Valentines Your just a bunch of f*cking lies!
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Post by MissUnderstood on Mar 14, 2008 18:01:14 GMT -5
nice and RAW. love it !!
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azazel
Crimson Soul
"Killing is killing whether done for duty, profit, or fun."
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Post by azazel on Mar 15, 2008 0:53:35 GMT -5
it needs to be cleaned up a bit but I liked it. It reminds me of why I hate valentines day....
P.S. punctuation is a must my friend!
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