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Post by 2standalone on Mar 28, 2008 1:22:12 GMT -5
Remove your hand from me Before I break it.
I promise I will
Stop searching for me I am no longer here
You alienated me Until you were alien yourself
I am broken Because you broke me
Move away Before you receive the same
I promise You will
You gave pain You gave me shame I regret the day I arrived In your life
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Post by bradley on Apr 2, 2008 1:12:43 GMT -5
Your short and precise lines deliver the emotion well. Love seems to end up as hates predecessor.
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Post by Dead Moon Child on Apr 9, 2008 10:12:34 GMT -5
I like the direct rage also in your poems. especially this part,"Move away Before you receive the same ". Good work within this short poem.
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