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token
Dec 22, 2007 23:59:14 GMT -5
Post by crazyeyedpoet on Dec 22, 2007 23:59:14 GMT -5
the lonely old man busted damn through and the lady who knew him could keep him well like the bell ringing in the ears? like the weird feeling of spears piercing you?
thats what i do with words i already heard thats fur sure the jured and the doing it right list thats my to-wit kiss some of this and some of that to the girls who's ass is fat
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token
Apr 2, 2008 1:05:22 GMT -5
Post by bradley on Apr 2, 2008 1:05:22 GMT -5
This poems oddness to me is what makes it interesting.
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token
Apr 9, 2008 10:16:08 GMT -5
Post by Dead Moon Child on Apr 9, 2008 10:16:08 GMT -5
There is a weird funny read within your poem, but a good type of funny.
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