littlewhipmaker
Demon Disciple
Who understands pleasure, without a little pain...
Posts: 438
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Post by littlewhipmaker on Feb 20, 2006 23:30:11 GMT -5
Resplendent is an afternoon upon a lullaby lake with limber lures to festoon the water of a wake.
Yet be that wake of sorrow or boat the answer is not clear for as I sit to write this note no fish have wandered near.
It must be gossip they have heard and now all surely know the grapevines unanimous word “Tis’ but death they tow.”
“Beware what shines and dips and though sparkles is not gold. A hypnotic spin to hungry lips brings only pain I’m told.”
“Do not be tempted by the wobble of that barbed delight. Surrendering to a need to gobble will bring you to the light.”
Tried and true technique with baits of every kind. Playing hide and seek with something I won’t find.
After hours of unbending solitude there cannot be a single doubt that this unsporting lassitude is from a meeting of wily trout.
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Post by colourlessthoughts on Feb 20, 2006 23:55:59 GMT -5
that was very clever and beautifully written. i suck at fishing as well, but you have come up with a great excuse. It is never the caster of the line... It is alsways the fish that swim by it.
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Erus
Dark Initiate
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Post by Erus on May 1, 2006 15:43:06 GMT -5
Yup,,, I always blame the fish myself. They ar finiky eaters (not biting my lure), too active (got off the hook) or just plain obnoxious (when you see that largmouth bass following your spinner clear to the boat, then turn away)
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Post by MusicalMasterpiece on May 4, 2006 21:00:55 GMT -5
yup, im enraged by fish...they piss me off...no doubt...i got really pissed once, cause all the fish that i caught were palm-sized fish, and then my cd player started skipping, so i threw my shitty, $10 discman into a rock, and it came back to hit me in the face and all the fish laughed at me while i sit there stunned, feeling stupid, then laughing at myself. ah, i have many fishing stories....although yours, here, is undeniably beautiful
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lxlxangelicxlxl
Crimson Soul
I have the will to live, Death... be my guide
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Post by lxlxangelicxlxl on Jul 11, 2006 11:34:28 GMT -5
To Musical Masterpiece: At least you can catch fish! I've never caught one =[
Anyways, this was a great piece i loved it. Very cute and a pleasure to read!
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