littlewhipmaker
Demon Disciple
Who understands pleasure, without a little pain...
Posts: 438
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ORANGE
Sept 21, 2005 11:44:47 GMT -5
Post by littlewhipmaker on Sept 21, 2005 11:44:47 GMT -5
Sometimes it really seems a curse this need to put my words to verse. I've been daunted many a time when haunted by a need to rhyme. This ebb and flow of metered phrase is perhaps just a passing phase. Please! no more insomnia tonight kept awake to get a line "just right". This poetry is a dangerous affliction where the world revolves around good diction. Someone save me, the end draws near. I'm faced with a poets greatest fear. I've tried so hard. I'm filled with doubt about my ability to work this out. Here is the moment of every poets demise. A word with no rhyme I simply despise, God save me.... Don't you realize? I'm about to write ORANGE!
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Sept 21, 2005 17:12:44 GMT -5
Post by Kitten on Sept 21, 2005 17:12:44 GMT -5
Awesomeness.
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ORANGE
Sept 21, 2005 19:46:01 GMT -5
Post by Aish on Sept 21, 2005 19:46:01 GMT -5
LOL! I see you haven't lost your edge, Whippy *hugs*
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rezel
Dark Initiate
Lacrimarum
Posts: 70
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ORANGE
Sept 28, 2005 7:07:22 GMT -5
Post by rezel on Sept 28, 2005 7:07:22 GMT -5
hehe ... very nice and witty. Still, "door hinge" is one acceptable answer Hoewever, they say "month" doesn't have a rhyme?
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littlewhipmaker
Demon Disciple
Who understands pleasure, without a little pain...
Posts: 438
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ORANGE
Oct 3, 2005 23:30:09 GMT -5
Post by littlewhipmaker on Oct 3, 2005 23:30:09 GMT -5
The magnificent Rezel comes and taking special delight whispers softly "door hinge" to end this awful plight.
LOL ;D
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Erus
Dark Initiate
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ORANGE
Oct 4, 2005 23:05:29 GMT -5
Post by Erus on Oct 4, 2005 23:05:29 GMT -5
Door Hinge?? "Oringe" maybe but hey,,, I think "poetic license" should include pronunciation,,, so,,, the door hinges have it......
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ORANGE
Oct 6, 2005 1:19:29 GMT -5
Post by Rezel on Oct 6, 2005 1:19:29 GMT -5
Indeed, rhymes include pronounciation and surely not just letters
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Oct 6, 2005 1:33:23 GMT -5
Post by Rezel on Oct 6, 2005 1:33:23 GMT -5
Awwww magnificent "littlewhipmaker", that was wonderful and humbling ;D really thanx
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ORANGE
Oct 17, 2005 22:02:57 GMT -5
Post by MirrorImage || egamIrorriM on Oct 17, 2005 22:02:57 GMT -5
yes, whippy has still got it...
....and i tried onbe time to find a rhyme for orange, and i almost succeeded, but then i realized it was a dream and i had invented the word that rhymed with it in my head.
i think it was "Gornje" oir something, and i dont remember the meaning i had cooked up for it...
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lxlxangelicxlxl
Crimson Soul
I have the will to live, Death... be my guide
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ORANGE
Jul 17, 2006 12:11:26 GMT -5
Post by lxlxangelicxlxl on Jul 17, 2006 12:11:26 GMT -5
That made me giggle haha i love it <3
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