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Post by DarkCloud on Jul 9, 2005 11:05:47 GMT -5
blood is red, bruises are blue, I am bitter and so are you!
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Post by MirrorImage || egamIrorriM on Jul 9, 2005 12:03:38 GMT -5
well....um....yeah.
the first two lines COULD be made into quite a poem, but the second two killed it, in my opinion..
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 11, 2005 1:48:31 GMT -5
its overdone, thats all. we have all heard this particular poem re-written a billion times. or mabye thats just me..?
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Post by DarkCloud on Jul 12, 2005 10:34:45 GMT -5
its all good, just need that to get out of my system.
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TranquilizedMessiah
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Post by TranquilizedMessiah on Jul 15, 2005 13:28:42 GMT -5
wait a sec didn't you tell me razorbaldes were overdone. hmmmm.
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queenie
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Timor mortis conturbat me.
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Post by queenie on Aug 3, 2005 16:16:20 GMT -5
Didn't mind this...a dark bitter twisted humour...but life ain't all roses and violets.
Q
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