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Post by JoyousMournings on Feb 2, 2005 17:49:18 GMT -5
Bashing TV, yay!
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No one can see it but me Look in that direction Oops, it's gone away now.
Tell me, what you are Or better yet, who you want to be Who's to say?
Paint me green, I don't mind.
God it's good! Buy it now! If you have already... I'll dance naked so you order more.
Let's make a deal, here You take that half, I'll take this It's garanteed to make you stronger, last longer
Watch me as I please you
It's the chance of a lifetime! Women lay all over it, really. See the emerald stones glitter in thier eyes?
I am the dancing monkey...
Dripping down the screen.
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Post by Reaper696 on Feb 2, 2005 18:12:29 GMT -5
I get the feeling of flipping through the channles when I read this. TV's such an easy victim, though I have more fun with the commercials myself. Nicely done...
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Post by JoyousMournings on Feb 3, 2005 12:05:26 GMT -5
Glad you liked it!
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Post by Yossarian on Feb 3, 2005 16:41:48 GMT -5
very nice, very nice...
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Feb 4, 2005 14:29:22 GMT -5
satire, executed with skill, the wording was thought out with percision... DUG IT!
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Post by Kitten on Feb 4, 2005 17:49:38 GMT -5
I get the whole satire gig, but it didn't sit with me here. Not till I got down to the last two lines did I catch meself smiling.
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queenie
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Post by queenie on Feb 6, 2005 10:04:17 GMT -5
Well written lil dig. Made me grin.
Q
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Post by Aish on Feb 8, 2005 16:43:21 GMT -5
THIS part, I likeee...
{Paint me green, I don't mind.
God it's good! Buy it now! If you have already... I'll dance naked so you order more. } good jab at commercialism
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Post by JoyousMournings on Feb 8, 2005 23:45:56 GMT -5
Thankye all!
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