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Post by DarkWinterDreams on Jan 7, 2005 5:53:32 GMT -5
Bad Poetry - 1.7.04
Its ucky, but somebody loves it like an ugly baby, only a mother could love it people saying things that
are supposed to be po- etic.
Forget easy to read, forget using the same word over and over frget ussing spel chek Doesnt it just reach deep inside of you and touch you when someone says something like And I am in love this lovely love, oh how special am I Now I know what convulsive vomiting is
Self reassurance, tuck it away, blasphemous tantrums, throw them away, and angst-y musings, you can leave those here, theyre cool by me
Okay, now its not even poetry anymore, its a rant, like all those 13 year old girls who get home from the movies with 9 friends on a saturday night, lock themselves in their room, and write sad poetry about unicorns with a digimon pencil and say they want to die as their mother knocks on their door and tells them its time
to shut out the light.
Its not poetry you idiot, its random thought, Everybody has a deep moment now and then, dont go crying the sky is falling, when you have a metanoia
So if you hate that silly unpleasant, ugly as can be po- etry
Join with me as I sing my off-key ballad to - Bad Poetry
Inspired by Kendra... (just kidding), this one would have to go out to all those thirteen year old girls who think writing dark poetry involves digimon and unicorns.
P.S. - no offense 13 year old girls on darkstar, you dont need to flame me.#nosmileys
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Post by Yossarian on Jan 7, 2005 8:03:31 GMT -5
well written, but wasn't really as funny as it could be, except for the last line, which made almost giddy...and the explanation was funnier than most of the poem. how true, how true, how very, very, true.... regardless, the poem was very well written, esp. very cleverly worded, liked that very much... nice (if not all that humourous) work! ;D yoss
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Jan 7, 2005 13:38:18 GMT -5
comedic indeed, this was so clever.. . I would never have thought to use teeny-boppers as an analogy, and it worked well for this piece... I thought it was funny, but there is no account for taste...
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Post by Yossarian on Jan 7, 2005 15:11:28 GMT -5
when it comes to humour, I guess everyone has different tastes...
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Post by littleskinny on Jan 9, 2005 17:05:05 GMT -5
I have to say I found it hilarious..the truth is the funniest thing....that's life!!! Fantastic job, muh applause is due you....!!! As you say, someone has to love it!!!!!!! Bad poetry...man, I'm almost immune to it by now....
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Bronte
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Post by Bronte on Jan 10, 2005 12:24:56 GMT -5
HA ha...this was funny....i liked how you you wrote in the style that you were flaming....it worked well..... :winkface:
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Post by Moonstone Maiden on Jan 16, 2005 2:11:36 GMT -5
:cheesyface: heee hee. That was good, unlike some others, it lives up to it's name. I like it. I think the sadest part of all is that we all have our differences, but can relate to this a bit. I agree, I don't think it was that humours, it didn't have me laughing, but a smile did tug at the corner of my lips. I liked it.
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Post by JoyousMournings on Jan 16, 2005 2:43:45 GMT -5
Ha, I don't fit this by several years. I try not to be wierdly writing..-want-to-die-because-my-boyfriend-is-a-big-dick, or my-life-is-hell-because-my-family-is-mean... None of those are even comparable to what I write about. If I write ABOUT anything. Angst gets boring.
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queenie
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Timor mortis conturbat me.
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Post by queenie on Jan 18, 2005 20:45:27 GMT -5
Thought it was hysterical...just so much 'truth'. While I never had a digimon pencil I think I might have wrote my fair share of bad poetry.
'Forget easy to read, forget using the same word over and over frget ussing spel chek Doesnt it just reach deep inside of you and touch you when someone says something like And I am in love this lovely love, oh how special am I Now I know what convulsive vomiting is'
Loved the shape and spacing and how it flowed with what you described. Bloody good!
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Post by carpenoctern on Jan 23, 2005 19:38:13 GMT -5
This was a amazing style and soooo funny also. Great write
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Post by Reaper696 on Feb 1, 2005 13:54:42 GMT -5
Anti-poetry, now this is something I can sink my teeth into...
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Post by Shymk on Feb 18, 2005 14:18:35 GMT -5
I think this was absolutely brilliant. You've used everything so well... I couldn't help but smile.
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Post by Addrienne on Feb 18, 2005 17:49:01 GMT -5
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