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Dec 22, 2004 17:25:21 GMT -5
Post by Kitten on Dec 22, 2004 17:25:21 GMT -5
I will pry your mouth with a crowbar, pour a gallon of milk down your throat, you're not lactose introlerant, are you?
I will smother you in bed, stuff smog down your throat, you're not a chain smoker, are you?
I will chew on you, inflate the bubble, pierce you while bloated, scrape you up from the bottom my throat.
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Dec 22, 2004 17:49:00 GMT -5
Post by Aish on Dec 22, 2004 17:49:00 GMT -5
I love this!!!
[I will pry your mouth with a crowbar, pour a gallon of milk down your throat, you're not lactose introlerant, are you?] so sweetly vile
[I will smother you in bed, stuff smog down your throat, you're not a chain smoker, are you?] hehehehe
[I will chew on you, inflate the bubble, pierce you while bloated, scrape you up from the bottom my throat.] such rancor! Hurrah!
(wish I had thought of it) :coolface:
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Dec 23, 2004 12:03:31 GMT -5
Post by Yossarian on Dec 23, 2004 12:03:31 GMT -5
hilarious and perfectly worded; I'll have to say that this is one of your best. every line was genius...I agree with chrys; it's the kind of poem that is so genius that you wish you had come up with it first!
very nice work...
yoss
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Dec 24, 2004 15:38:02 GMT -5
Post by Kitten on Dec 24, 2004 15:38:02 GMT -5
Hilarious eh? Think it fit for the new born Humor board? ;D And thank you both, you flatter me.
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Dec 24, 2004 16:17:12 GMT -5
Post by Hyde on Dec 24, 2004 16:17:12 GMT -5
Glorious form of bashing and torture in my mind. Great image!
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Dec 24, 2004 16:24:29 GMT -5
Post by Kitten on Dec 24, 2004 16:24:29 GMT -5
Heh thanks, though this is a pretty familiar piece for me, just a quickie idea, should revise at a later time.
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queenie
Demon Disciple
Timor mortis conturbat me.
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Dec 25, 2004 16:11:17 GMT -5
Post by queenie on Dec 25, 2004 16:11:17 GMT -5
I think it's pretty damn fab just the way it is...mebbe a quickie but perfectly wicked.
Q
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Dec 25, 2004 16:36:28 GMT -5
Post by Yossarian on Dec 25, 2004 16:36:28 GMT -5
Hilarious eh? Think it fit for the new born Humor board? ;D And thank you both, you flatter me. no need to feel flattered, just telling you how I feel. chrys, move this to humor...
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Jan 15, 2005 11:49:54 GMT -5
Post by Addrienne on Jan 15, 2005 11:49:54 GMT -5
funny, ingenious, but kind of gross if you think about it:( one typo: "introlerant" should be "intolerant".
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Jan 22, 2005 21:04:31 GMT -5
Post by carpenoctern on Jan 22, 2005 21:04:31 GMT -5
excellent
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