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Sins
Jan 2, 2008 5:24:00 GMT -5
Post by bradley on Jan 2, 2008 5:24:00 GMT -5
Twisting and swirling In the dark of my mind The demons and horrors You won’t expect to find
They’ll haunt me forever And never let me rest Is this god’s fury? Am I put to the test?
Sinking, dark, wretched thoughts In my mind, a deep dark well The water is black and burning Like a hole straight to hell
From the laws of above I set myself free I will do what I want And I’ll just be me
Actions, unforgiveable But I’m doing what I can My actions, unforgiveable Un-punishable by man
Ask for forgiveness Men of the cloth will say Yet they’ve sinned the most So maybe they should pray
Scandals of terror With minors at their side Step on this elevator with me Priest And to hell we’ll both ride
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Feb 22, 2008 1:17:31 GMT -5
Post by ladysilverwolf on Feb 22, 2008 1:17:31 GMT -5
wow...very good.
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Feb 22, 2008 21:38:48 GMT -5
Post by adarkflameburns on Feb 22, 2008 21:38:48 GMT -5
That was great. I really like the imagery.
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steinbergm
Dark Initiate
i dont bite....hard
Posts: 64
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Mar 4, 2008 0:40:13 GMT -5
Post by steinbergm on Mar 4, 2008 0:40:13 GMT -5
it flowed very well nice read
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May 31, 2008 1:33:55 GMT -5
Post by schwabster00 on May 31, 2008 1:33:55 GMT -5
that was so deep and relatable. well done!
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