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Post by Lina Inverse on Jan 19, 2004 1:53:23 GMT -5
She's like all the other dolls With high cantaloupes for breasts That contrast her narrow waist And locks of strawberry blond. Long legs, so firm yet so soft, Will bend slightly at the knee. But unlike all the others, Her eyes: an exotic green.
Walk down the toy store aisle. Some eyes are periwinkle, While others, blue violet. Most of them are baby blue. After passing twenty blues, They fade to the same dull shade. Some day, you will hunger for Her eyes, an exotic green.
Throughout history, locked up Inside the playroom of the Typical prejudiced youth, Two Barbies, one in each hand. Gently carried in the right Are the eyes of baby blue. And squeezed in the left hand are Her eyes (an exotic green)
Baby blue sits daintily Upon her throne, displaying Her elegant wedding dress, Ready for her third marriage For a riper banana. The old dick, too small. While the Other doll never wed, for Her eyes: an exotic green.
It's not that she's alone; she's Got a girlfriend of six years. Been loyal to each other Throughout the entire time. But don't be fooled by their strong Relationship based on love. It can't be moral, because Her eyes- an exotic green.
She's harassed every day Just for being different. She's shunned by her God-damned church Just 'cause her eyes aren't blue. She's the same as all the other dolls. But her eyes! It can't be true! So much hate... It's all 'cause of Her eyes, an exotic green.
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Post by black jewelled rain on Jan 19, 2004 4:55:48 GMT -5
Wow. That was quite a poem. It was so original. So deep. It was absolutely amazing! I'm stunned. I'm totally speechless. Wow!
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Post by Lina Inverse on Jan 19, 2004 17:41:38 GMT -5
*blushes* Thanks. I think this is among the best I've written. And by far the best gay-oriented one.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jan 19, 2004 18:21:48 GMT -5
i agree. this is definately some of your best work. i remember reading this one at poet sanctuary.. this was the poem that made me invite you here.
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Post by :.:.:KrO NiC DaZe:.:.: on Jan 20, 2004 2:22:32 GMT -5
Very nice...original....very good shit...lata
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