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Post by brokenXangel on Jul 13, 2005 16:14:40 GMT -5
he drew me in so slowly with such seductive knowledge spitting his vicious static and keeping me close with tight wires
thats when the tv tried to eat me
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TranquilizedMessiah
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Post by TranquilizedMessiah on Jul 13, 2005 16:22:04 GMT -5
awsome
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 16, 2005 1:22:08 GMT -5
that first stanza is GREAT! worded well.. f*ck.. i can honestly say that i believe it to be perfect.
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bloodwine
Crimson Soul
listens to the voices in his head
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Post by bloodwine on Jul 16, 2005 1:33:44 GMT -5
kudos...nicely done
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Post by DarkCloud on Jul 16, 2005 10:37:20 GMT -5
Greetings! i see myself in the near future facing this kind of problem. good write, aimee.
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Post by brokenXangel on Jul 16, 2005 12:58:15 GMT -5
Thanks lots I genuinely believed the TV to be trying to eat me.. My friend had to "kill" it Life is so much more fun under the influence
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