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Post by Aish on Jun 18, 2005 4:14:58 GMT -5
Temptation. Yes, the proper conduit, the enveloping word. So, which fancy shall you take? You are either the greatest blessing, or the greatest curse, ever wrought - I miss you. Desperately. Right at this very moment, I feel you I f*cking smell you - I want to wrap myself in your soul, and bathe in your blood - make love as if the dawn shall never wake... and I know, I know. I never wish to taste freedom again.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jun 20, 2005 23:56:36 GMT -5
wow.
chrys.. this is easily one of my favourite pieces from you. right from the heart. so much meaning for so few words. im awestruck.
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Post by Aish on Jun 22, 2005 14:07:29 GMT -5
*contented*
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EbonyKiss
Dark Initiate
.:Beautifully Twisted:.
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Post by EbonyKiss on Jun 24, 2005 11:36:17 GMT -5
This is amazing! Just amazing. The word, the structure, the rhythm - all drawn neatly together to create a vivid and passionate piece of work. I love it.
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Post by DarkCloud on Jun 29, 2005 17:25:39 GMT -5
Greetings!
I'll wrap myself here for a while! *claps*
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Post by misty on Jul 8, 2005 9:01:18 GMT -5
Some really amazing lines in here. Beautifully written, passionate and well describe write.
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