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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jun 16, 2005 2:03:53 GMT -5
deceiving words, slick and pleasing dragged me down.
now im kicking and screaming, afraid that ill make the same mistakes again.
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Post by Aish on Jun 16, 2005 2:29:29 GMT -5
Great. I'm already kinda bummed, then I read this, adn now I'm full blown depressed. I've been part of said cycle. Did I learm? God, let's hope so. Did you learn? Time will tell. The scary part of that is, even when you think you're making better choices, people f*ck you over anyway. Damnit, I'm sorry hun. thanks for venting, it's effective. The lack of capitalization really speaks volumes here, makes the reader respond to the faintness of your soul as it leads into your introspection. Plus when you have 'afraid' as a line unto itself, and 'again' as a line unto itself, it makes the reader mentally pause and concentrate on the emotion garnered.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jun 16, 2005 2:40:31 GMT -5
thanks a lot chrys.. youve really got me thinking tonight. emotional response.. i appreciate it.
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Post by x__powerABUSE on Jun 16, 2005 2:55:04 GMT -5
Wow. This definately seems like something I would be feeling after a few drinks. I relate to this alot but I think we all do. This is a very deep subject and I could go into it but I think chrys has went deep enough for all of us.
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