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Post by Lina Inverse on Apr 17, 2004 20:47:21 GMT -5
Write a very dark poem about a potato. And not a humorously dark poem. One that people will take seriously. .....ok, that's a little hard. At least TRY to write a serious dark poem about a potato. ^_^'
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Post by Burnttonothing on Apr 17, 2004 22:05:26 GMT -5
hehe i just had to try!!!!!
Mashed and smashed Ripped apart Created for you To tear right through Just an object without feeling You use me To nourish as I’m just not real Still I cry you don’t know what I feel The pain that over takes me As you stab me through Mashed and smashed I was just created for you
oh well if it's not good at least i can say i tried
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Post by littleskinny on Apr 18, 2004 14:49:16 GMT -5
heh heh...shame it can't be funny, cos "spud" rhymes with "blood" and "fries" with "dies".
Well here's my response:
My hands submerged in water My sleeves, like sponges, drink. I grit my teeth, chew my lip, Why don't I ever think!!
When I sat there, all alone, last night, the sharpener blade in hand and let out all those hot, red tears I'd forgotten the meal she'd planned.
My mother's left the kitchen now. It's just me and the potato peel. Heavy sigh of relief that she's not said a word about the scars I refuse to let heal.
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Post by littleskinny on May 4, 2004 10:40:13 GMT -5
I accept a challenge and no-one reads it...hmmm that'll teach me!
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Post by Lina Inverse on May 4, 2004 21:55:52 GMT -5
I read it.... Both are very good, and very dark. Hehe. I've just been busy as f*ck lately (AP testing.... grrr) so I haven't replied.
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Post by littleskinny on May 5, 2004 12:30:11 GMT -5
Hey don't worry I was just bitchin'. I'm lazy as all hell, mesself.
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