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Post by littleskinny on May 28, 2004 11:11:39 GMT -5
I love this line, I love the way the words echo each other and tangle around your tongue and want to have a whole piece in the same style...only I can't think of any more! So let's throw it open and see what the collective genius comes up with !! ;D
The line is:
Your frown burrows deeper into your furrowed brow
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Post by Reaper696 on Jun 2, 2004 16:51:18 GMT -5
Your frown burrows deeper into your furrowed brow Your heart heaves heavily as I hope your haven's here I see such steam assimilating the air My mind makes miniature movements towards escape
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Voltarrens
Crimson Soul
Creative Dreamer in the Night
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Post by Voltarrens on Jun 29, 2004 9:35:15 GMT -5
Your frown burrows deeper into your furrowed brow Your heart heaves heavily as I hope your haven's here I see such steam assimilating the air My mind makes miniature movements towards escape For all those things in the world that seem to dissipate When all that can be seen on far horizons Are the minions of the ravages of time ill spent Our sufferings and distress toward this bent
What lies behind those eyes looking so distantly?
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Claire
Demon Disciple
You are drinking from your glass of life while mine is long time empty.
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Post by Claire on Nov 21, 2004 18:35:21 GMT -5
On your eyes relying, now they are lying once lied down, I would breathe better blindly.
Is that what you asked for?
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