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Post by _black phoenix_ on Dec 28, 2003 14:24:47 GMT -5
black venom spouts forth from an endless void, empty of thought and vacant of emotion.
feelings swirl and twist, breaking in a whirlwind of confusion.
you tumble eternally, cutting and bruising yourself along the way, forever seaching for an end.
feel free to modify, continue, or add whatever you like!
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Post by Lina Inverse on Dec 28, 2003 22:24:36 GMT -5
black venom spouts forth from an endless void, empty of thought and vacant of emotion. feelings swirl and twist, breaking in a whirlwind of confusion. tumbling eternally, cuts and bruises marring pale white skin throughout the search feelings twist and break squirming through a tornado of pain (So with the format I've set up, the next two-line stanza will start with "feelings break and squirm")
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