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Post by softspokenlies078 on Dec 23, 2003 11:59:11 GMT -5
If courage is nothing What else do I have? I don’t have your love That’s all in the past
If trust isn’t real What’s left in my life? An empty room A sharpened knife
If our love never happened Was I always alone? What about countless hours We spent on the phone
If my pain’s been for nothing Then why do you cry? Every time that I see you Surrounded by guys
If all of them want you Why are you alone? Why don’t you just pick one? Is your heart made of stone?
If courage is nothing Then what do you have You don’t have my love That’s all in the past
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 23, 2003 16:46:12 GMT -5
This was a lovely poem and was really easy to read. I really liked how you started the first line of each stanza with 'what if'. And I thought the way the contrast between the first and last paragraph was very clever. Great poem.
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