Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
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Post by Mistress on Dec 19, 2003 17:22:29 GMT -5
Your blood is now what I taste As my vengence is fullfilled Not letting it go to waste For I am the one you killed
The chill of your touch The pain of your embrace The yearning of so much All spread across your face
Here comes a river of fear Turning into an ocean of blood From only a single tear Here comes a massive flood
You were the death of me Now I'll be the death of you I'll forever set you free So you can experience it too
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 20, 2003 21:13:54 GMT -5
Good rythmn and rhyming in this poem. It also had a good flow to it. There seems to be alot of emotion behind it - an emotion that I can really relate to. Your final stanza was, once again, the best!
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