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Post by Lina Inverse on Dec 11, 2003 0:50:15 GMT -5
I keep it a secret You open it to the world But everyone else has nothing of the kind
I'm an addict You experiment But everyone else has never cut
I chose to bleed You chose to suffocate But everyone else chose to live
I stayed at the hospital You went home But everyone else has never even ventured out
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 12, 2003 21:06:49 GMT -5
Wow. I;d love to know more about the story behind this (if you don't mind me asking). It sounds like there's alot of emotion that's gone into this piece.
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somaybeitsme
Dark Initiate
Conformed and Confined, We all bleed with sadness
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Post by somaybeitsme on Dec 13, 2003 1:58:04 GMT -5
i really like this poem.
it is very personal and revealing...
my favorite lines are "Im an addict You experiment But everyone else has never cut"
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Post by lostandalone on Dec 13, 2003 12:19:14 GMT -5
i would also like to hear the story behind this poem, it is nicely done, dark part of the inner soul maybe?
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Post by Lina Inverse on Dec 13, 2003 17:31:10 GMT -5
There really isn't too much to say.... basically, me and a friend I had shared a lot of similar experiences (cutting, suicide attempt)
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Post by lostandalone on Dec 15, 2003 8:21:27 GMT -5
yea, but he ment something to you, right?
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Post by Lina Inverse on Dec 16, 2003 22:41:36 GMT -5
Yeah, I guess... He was my friends.... we aren't speaking anymore. He just stopped talking to me one day.... I don't know why. And now I'm just like "screw it.... he was kind of a bastard anyway"
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