Judge me

[angelofsuicide]

I would like to dedicate this poem to the American people my breathan and friends f*ck YOU ALL mwa ha ha.

I stand guilty of any thing you want to say
Who gave you the f*cking right to judge me anyway

f*ck your politics and f*ck your police
pigs will get what pigs deserve
when they die and f*cking bleed in the streets

Judge me tell me what my life is all about
Like painted puppet pretending to have it figured out

You bleed the same blood i bleed across this rusty knife
What gives you the right to tell me how to live my life

Your constructed society founded on lies
will fall and crumble like everything dies

you'll eat the repurucustions of your attempt to be in control
you'll squeal like a f*cking pig when you reap what you sow

So judge me
you dont know me
Your no better than me
I hate you for being you
and you hate me cause im not what you want me to be

Your trials of hypocirsy. your a hypocrit in every way
Your plastic reality will crumble to dust one day
and youll be a rotting corpse in the f*cking earth
You cant tell me what to f*cking do or how i should be
you condridict your so called right to be free
free to die for your so called holly views
and you wonder why 12 yr old kids are on the news
for blasting their f*cking parents away
we live in your soicety no wplay by the rules of your own game

I f*cking rise every time i take a stand
my lifes a f*cking battle, so think you have the upper hand

your flaw is your concept of your so called flawless ways
so judge me will see who has the last word to say

Judge me bitch
because i wasnt born rich
Ill judge you just the same
when i put my last card on the table
maybe then youll see the outcome of your f*cking game

Tell the youth what they should f*cking be
poullut the earth with your f*cking disease
drown your childern in chemicals as they pretend to believe your f*cking lies
write it off as a statistic when they slice your throat
and no one hears the crys
of your land of the free and your home of the brave
the scum of the f*cking earth and my will will live beyond my grave

Judge me
pretend to be
the holy one
control me
posion me
with your tv
and chemically controled thoughts
and wonder why people crash airplanes into your bulidings
its the punishmenst that YOU BROUGHT
jude me
continue to think
your propaganda contols every one
blame me
when your society
creates a bad seed just like me
as you cast out your own f*cking son

[_black phoenix_]

wow.. such a powerful write, deadinmyhead. those last two stanzas really stuck out for me. great work. hopefully you will get a little more feedback than my fairly useless comments.

[littleskinny]

Erm...no, Black Pheonix!

I didn't like it so much, and I also found the spelling mistakes offputting. Sorry I can't be more encouraging.

[_black phoenix_]

littleskinny said:

I also found the spelling mistakes offputting.

i did as well. its really distracting, but you need to realize that no matter how much you bug the poets who dont fix their spelling mistakes, most of them dont care enough to change.. some even get mad at you! hehe

[Kitten]

This is just too stale for my interest.
Plus the effing this and effing that was too much of a distraction.

Oh and deadinmyhead, what makes you think that you are any better than those you "hate"?
Too self righteous mister. Plus I think you're making yourself sound a little too important here. But I'm sorry, you're no messiah, nor is what you're offering here very new.

[angelofsuicide]

KittenX said:

This is just too stale for my interest.
Plus the effing this and effing that was too much of a distraction.

Oh and deadinmyhead, what makes you think that you are any better than those you "hate"?
Too self righteous mister. Plus I think you're making yourself sound a little too important here. But I'm sorry, you're no messiah, nor is what you're offering here very new.

Lol u r funny. This poem was written at the spur of the moment. If it offended you than quit reading my pomes.
I never said I was better than anyone else, but take it however you want. I could care less.

[Kitten]

I know I am funny, but my comments above clearly lacked any humor, so I believe you were imagining things.

Offended me? Now that is humorous. I see you're being defensive, that's a natural response, so I understand. No worries.

I'm not going to argue about what you said, what you implied, spur of the moment or not, doesn't justify the fact that I flat out disliked the message in the poem. But remember, it's all irrelevant because you don't care right?

I'd love to banter with you some more, but it would not be in public. (For Leash's sake)
But then again, now that I think about it, I guess I don't care enough either. And I'm already bored with this.
So pardon me if you thought I was too harsh, sensitive mister. But I suppose I just felt like speaking my mind.

[angelofsuicide]

Well than, Im glad you speak your mind more power to you. My expressions are my way of speaking my mind. So with that I thank you for reading my poem may we please leave it at that.

[Clairvoyantmind]

[glow=black,2,300]ah i like this one alot [/glow]

[angelsflight]

indeed i liked this. tis reality and i like the way you've described it.

'write it off as a statistic when they slice your throat'

i liked that in particular. good write.

[LORDMORNINGSTAR]

yEAH... saw you swig a 40 chief, this is what I expect from you. Your not 100% wrong nor are you 100% right either, poetry is definitely the premier outlet out side of fighting, f*cking, drinking and masterbation. I do appreciate your spitefulness, and the points your right about your really right about, only one turn off " pigs will get what pigs deserve" its a nine inch nails lyric, un-originality gets my goat. overall good shit aside from the numerous type O's. Write on.

[angelofsuicide]

"pigs will get what pigs deserve" hmmm yea now that you mention it , though thats not even the full line. I am inspired by other peoples shit but I try to stray from using other peoples work. Anyhow thax for the positive feedback, and thanx for reading.

[LORDMORNINGSTAR]

SCHOOLED BY SATAN... KEEP 'EM CUMMIN

[angelofsuicide]

LORDMORNINGSTAR said:

SCHOOLED BY SATAN... KEEP 'EM CUMMIN

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[LORDMORNINGSTAR]

It's a Tenacious D lyric, the keep 'em cummin is porn talk for keep the "poems" coming.