Odette
Dark Initiate
After everything I'm still standing I now await what will happen next
Posts: 7
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Bent
Mar 12, 2004 18:26:22 GMT -5
Post by Odette on Mar 12, 2004 18:26:22 GMT -5
If I could rewind time These hands of mine O they would wrap around your neck And enjoy every second Of clenching and twisting And making you desperatly gasp And these eyes These eyes would light up like the fourth of july To see you break inside Clawing, searching, looking for a way to escape my grasp But my mind No my mind is too fast Too fast for you to free yourself It jumps and darts and then it waits O how it waits To make the right move And then attacks And now your struggling to breathe Aching for air Trying in vain to retaliate But...... I haven't touched a hair on your head Because time don't rewind And I can't take back what's rightfully mine But these hands, and these eyes, and this mind Are still waiting Waiting for you And when it seems that you can't breathe And your fighting just to stay alive When your eyes won't shut And your head won't stop pounding inside of your skull Maybe you'll think twice next time
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Bent
Mar 13, 2004 17:06:22 GMT -5
Post by BlackRainbow on Mar 13, 2004 17:06:22 GMT -5
Very very good, i like everything about this poem!
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Bent
Mar 13, 2004 17:44:41 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Mar 13, 2004 17:44:41 GMT -5
As do I... I know many times where I've felt like that...
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