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Post by :.:.:KrO NiC DaZe:.:.: on Jan 1, 2004 23:08:09 GMT -5
[glow=black,2,300]"What They Say"
I try to stay strong I wonder everyday "What am I doing wrong?" Days pass by And I can't help but wonder "Will these feelings ever die?" I'm not myself anymore I've changed alot I'm not that little girl That everyone's forgot I look in the mirror At an unfamiliar face The girl I knew is gone And she left without a trace Where have I gone? This couldn't be me I'm not this angry I wish everyone could see They look at my past And judge my future They say, "She will not last" Do they not see the hurt They've put on me They think they're right But I disagree They don't know me They don't look past All the bad things I've done They say that I'm trash I'm not gonna fight them They can say what the please But I'm not what they think But They'll never see [/glow]
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AxXis
Crimson Soul
I know the pale thing in the darkest of places.
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Post by AxXis on Jan 4, 2004 2:13:55 GMT -5
I can relate to a lot of this. Especially the part about looking in the mirror and seeing an unfamiliar face. I've changed so much since I was a kid. Thanks for sharing.
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DarkenTheSky
Demon Disciple
Beneath the Watery Lust Garden, my Secret Lies. . .
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Post by DarkenTheSky on Jan 14, 2004 4:45:08 GMT -5
I liked this. it was good. especially: "They look at my past And judge my future" That is an awesome statement that I don't think I've ever thought of, and it really makes me think. I really like this poem, And I can relate, also. Your poems always make a great read
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Post by :.:.:KrO NiC DaZe:.:.: on Jan 15, 2004 10:10:22 GMT -5
Thanx axxis and darkenthesky....I appreciate the comments
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