DarkenTheSky
Demon Disciple
Beneath the Watery Lust Garden, my Secret Lies. . .
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Post by DarkenTheSky on Nov 10, 2003 6:21:32 GMT -5
What would make you celebrate Every year on your birthdate?
Everyone smiles that day, Because everyone gets to say Happy birthday to you, Do what ever the hell you want to.
But we all know that you don't know why, Don't know why you'd even try.
Don't celebrate something you don't understand!
Birthdays are the celebration of life! And are you happy to be alive? Do you not complain and criticize? Are you happy to have survived
A whole nother year? That's my worst fear!
Have you never wished to die? If you havn't, you F***ing lie!
You can't live and not complain.
And next year on your celebration of life, Don't expect a gift from me, I'm not even grateful that I'm alive, Let alone you, I wish you'd die!
Rid the world of ungreatful scumb Who think they know much, But really know none.
All they want are gifts and surprise, No one really opens their eyes. They think it's all a joke, Unles it's Christmas and Christians Are shoving it down your throat.
So unles you are excited For living yet another year, Shut the F*** up on your birthday, Because I really don't want to hear
Another happy birthday song.
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Post by Lina Inverse on Nov 15, 2003 20:15:01 GMT -5
Angry! It really resonated w/ me
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AxXis
Crimson Soul
I know the pale thing in the darkest of places.
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Post by AxXis on Nov 24, 2003 23:13:40 GMT -5
I like it! You really got your message across. "Have you never wished to die?" "If you haven't, you f***ing lie!" This really hit me. Why do we celebrate birthdays? great write
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
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Post by Mistress on Dec 20, 2003 16:33:54 GMT -5
I've never really stopped to think about it that way. Now that it processes, it's quite true. A dose of reality to the hard hitters always does everyone some good. Great poem...
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