pipes
Dark Initiate
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Post by pipes on Jan 17, 2005 14:46:19 GMT -5
(starts with vocals with bass drum on 1/4's, nothing else) So we've hit another patch of stormy weather and I can't do a thing to make this better So just listen to my song cause tomorrow I’ll be gone I’m sorry, I’m in love with you forever
(slow instrumental section, picks up into still pretty slow, but heavier verse)
Rotting in this chemical depression (Can’t remember my name) The drugs in my blood dip into ressesion (Things are never the same) So I’ll lay here holding her and hurting you and hurting me and I’ll say, "Dear, this I’m sure I’m coming to, and we can't be"
(faster, drums busy, with energy) It feels like something wrong and I’m just to far gone to give a damn, it’s just not worth it
I’ll miss them all when I’m gone but I’ll miss you more than anyone I’ll miss them all when I’m gone but I’ll miss you more than anyone
(instrumental, main guitar solo, into slow down) (hi-hat in 1/4's, nothing else) I’m breaking down I’m wearing out I’m reaching wits end I’d do anything for you
(still hi-hat, but snare 1/16's every beat, accent first note each beat, cuts off after first "anything") I’m breaking down I’m wearing out I’m reaching wits end I’d do anything (anything)
It feels like something wrong and I’m just too far-gone to give a damn, it’s just not worth it
I’ll miss them all when I’m gone but I’ll miss you more than anyone I’ll miss them all when I’m gone but I’ll miss you more than anyone
("I’ll miss you" repeated in backing vocals, "I’ll" two counts "miss you" two counts, repeats immediately) I’ll miss them all when I’m gone but I’ll miss you more than anyone I’ll miss them all when I’m gone but I’ll miss you more than anyone
(on word "more" heavy bass/snare/ride cymbal hit, let ride ring but everything else cuts out and vocalist finishes)
Despite the subject, want it to be a pretty up beat song as far as the music of it goes, simple, light, quick drum parts, happy chords, happy vocal progressions, not supposed to be a depressing sound
I posted this before on another site (darkwriting.com) a little while ago, and I thinks its one of my better pieces (thought I’ve grown to dislike the verse) so I thought it would give a decent idea as to what can be expected of me. please tell me what you think, thanks to everyone who replies
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Anita
Demon Disciple
Take The Hurt To The Core Of My Heart and Feel it Bleeding, Pounding,Coming Apart.
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Post by Anita on Jan 17, 2005 15:04:25 GMT -5
Hey,Pipes,nice to see you here,somehow i feel you close to me now,you know! You need to send me this song by all means,it's perfect,I love it though i don't remember reading it on DW!
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Post by Yossarian on Jan 17, 2005 16:26:24 GMT -5
welcome to Dark Star, pipes. ;D
this was an interesting attempt, but it didn't feel like anything more than that...it sounds like you've got one hell of an instrumental part, but the lyrics going with it are kind of cliche and uninspired...
very cool, pipes, enjoyed that...
good start, I hope that you continue working on this, it could make a very cool song!
yossarian
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jan 18, 2005 21:57:38 GMT -5
i like the side notes you put in.. let me catch the right feel. usually i have problems putting lyrics to music in my head(i just read them as poetry) but i had no problems whatsoever with these! thanks for sharing, pipes.
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Daemonized
Crimson Soul
There are noises in the dark ... the owners of which ... are better not to behold
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Post by Daemonized on Jan 18, 2005 23:19:35 GMT -5
Greetings,
Damn pipes ... thats a wicked little song there. I don't agree with you wanting the song to be upbeat and happy though. You've written a cool dark piece and you want it to be happy ? Excuse me language, but f*ck that idea. You have a talent, so use it correctly.
That little crusade over .... loved this piece so please leave it dark if you ever put it to music.
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pipes
Dark Initiate
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Post by pipes on Jan 19, 2005 18:36:45 GMT -5
thanks eveybody, i think i can make the music dark, exept for the chorus, i can't hear it getting all that heavy, but i can't write guitar parts so i'm not sure how that'll affect what i have going in my head, maybe that won't be as light as i thought
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