Daemonized
Crimson Soul
There are noises in the dark ... the owners of which ... are better not to behold
Posts: 138
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Post by Daemonized on Jan 18, 2005 23:08:52 GMT -5
Greetings,
This song was one of my first Industrial outings and so quite special to me. However, seeing as it seems a bit incomplete, any criticism or suggestions or even finishings of are completely welcome.
SINS OF THE MACHINE
Give me what I want scar me , god me , star me Deconstruct my mind until I scream subject me to the sins of the machine Infect me with jaded hypocrisy I`ll show you anarchy
Every word is hatred every deed unclean This is the future these are the sins of the machine
Give me what I have earned break me , burn me , rape me Degenerate my soul until it screams subjected to the sins of the machine Bow .. obey .. worship this madness I`ll give you all chaos
Every thought is hatred every deed unclean This is my future the sins of the machine
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jan 19, 2005 4:08:47 GMT -5
damn! this is some wicked, solid writing, daemonized.
i havent read any lyrics at dark star that ive enjoyed even half as much as these..
blown away.
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Anita
Demon Disciple
Take The Hurt To The Core Of My Heart and Feel it Bleeding, Pounding,Coming Apart.
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Post by Anita on Jan 19, 2005 16:58:56 GMT -5
Yeah,true.It's an astounding write.Really powerful.It's sounds something like the fall of men ...whatever ;D
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Post by Yossarian on Jan 19, 2005 16:59:45 GMT -5
I agree with leash...I read lots of stuff here that I like, but this is something I actually enjoy reading--fun to read, if you will.
this completely blew me away...I have nothing more to say. feature well earned.
yoss
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Daemonized
Crimson Soul
There are noises in the dark ... the owners of which ... are better not to behold
Posts: 138
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Post by Daemonized on Jan 19, 2005 23:16:25 GMT -5
Wow ... what a nice surprise ! I thank you kindly for the nice words ... as always, it means a lot to me.
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Post by DarkWinterDreams on Jan 20, 2005 6:53:49 GMT -5
This is awesome, great job. It makes me think of a society, much like the bleak future we are brainwashed into believing we have before us. It just has that ring to it "the sins of the machine" much like cellar door... if you get what im talking about. A++
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Post by Addrienne on Jan 20, 2005 9:01:29 GMT -5
I agree with Yoss, very fun to read.. I enjoyed this very much. feature deserved muchly.
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Post by gravedancer on Jan 24, 2005 4:06:59 GMT -5
wow ! very creative, no suggestions though its amazing,very solid
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