Anita
Demon Disciple
Take The Hurt To The Core Of My Heart and Feel it Bleeding, Pounding,Coming Apart.
Posts: 327
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Post by Anita on Jan 17, 2005 14:24:13 GMT -5
Heal You
Your suffering has slain me in the most hideous of ways. Your human beingness has stained me, this dirt on my soul I thurst to erase
For it wrenches God from me…
Bridge:
My devil’s scar, come rest in my arms and I’ll be your deliverance!
Chorus:
I’ll restore your hearing, your speech and your sight. I’ll heal your wounds searing and soothe your troubled mind. I’ll cleanse your demons and raise you from the dead. When your frail humanity weakens I’ll walk on water to keep your head.
Let me heal you…
Your transgressions have hurt me as if driving thorns into my head. Your primary lust has burnt me, exhorting me to bleed and tear myself to shreds
For God has abandoned me…
Bridge:
My devil’s scar, come rest in my arms and I’ll be your deliverance!
Chorus:
I’ll restore your hearing, your speech and your sight. I’ll heal your wounds searing and soothe your troubled mind. I’ll cleanse your demons and raise you from the dead. When your frail humanity weakens I’ll walk on water to keep your head.
Let me heal you…
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Post by Yossarian on Jan 17, 2005 16:32:06 GMT -5
sorry, but this did nothing for me...it seemed quoted almost directly from the bible; I could feel some emotion in this, but once again, I had to read it several times in order to grasp at it.
interesting, anita, that was very cleverly worded...
yossarian
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Anita
Demon Disciple
Take The Hurt To The Core Of My Heart and Feel it Bleeding, Pounding,Coming Apart.
Posts: 327
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Post by Anita on Jan 17, 2005 16:36:39 GMT -5
You're absolutely right - it's quoted from the Bible. That's the very meaning of it...I'm sorry to hear that...
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Post by Yossarian on Jan 17, 2005 16:42:56 GMT -5
oh well, it was a good try!
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Post by carpenoctern on Feb 3, 2005 22:09:01 GMT -5
I liked the fact that you quoted the bible here. I'll agree that the overall concept was hard to grasp, but all in all it was a nice write...
I also give you kudos for quoting the bible. That's not a very easy thing to do, because you can easily offend and piss off a lot of people.
Nice write, Anita
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Anita
Demon Disciple
Take The Hurt To The Core Of My Heart and Feel it Bleeding, Pounding,Coming Apart.
Posts: 327
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Post by Anita on Feb 5, 2005 11:02:22 GMT -5
Thank you,Carpe. * sighs* I try my best.
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