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Post by Yossarian on Nov 22, 2004 7:14:08 GMT -5
Aside from some typos, this was a very well-written song. The symbolism here--of love being an epic battle in which no one comes out alive--is fantastic.
I've got an idea about what the title means in relevance to the rest of the song, but I'm not sure if it's correct. Can you tell me what you meant by the title?
Nice work!
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Post by My shadowed Life on Nov 22, 2004 13:53:55 GMT -5
its another olf song ^^; sorry about that thanks for telling me about the typos ill fix that the title means something witten last year so long ive me a lil while to think
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Post by Yossarian on Nov 23, 2004 7:11:59 GMT -5
my idea about the title was that your battle with the person you love was dark and secret....that was my interpretation. who knows, we all have different ideas about what the titles of poems/songs mean.
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Post by My shadowed Life on Nov 23, 2004 13:41:17 GMT -5
thats a good interpitation of it
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