Daemonized
Crimson Soul
There are noises in the dark ... the owners of which ... are better not to behold
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Post by Daemonized on Nov 4, 2004 16:48:50 GMT -5
Greetings, Trying to envision this as a thumping industrial tune ... lemme know if I'm just kidding myself. INFECTED/ADDICTED Walls of flesh screaming pain cancerous stalker of life benevolent perversion twisted slave sinful preacher of lies Infected addicted Cut down by greed restricted Sedated left behind to bleed Suicide saving grace screaming grief systematic violator of faith generated dirty taste of disbelief hollow depressor of the sane Infected addicted Cut down by greed restricted Sedated left behind to scream Deserted prophecy screaming division sick designer of the plagues Static mechanical cyber religion Focused generator of hate Infected addicted Cut down by greed restricted Sedated left behind to need
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Nov 6, 2004 3:05:35 GMT -5
this works really well, deamonized. i like the diction. sorry my feedback is so simple.. im just not able to leave proper comments lately! however, it would be appreciated if you left some feedback for other writings as well.. it keeps the site active and its only fair!
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Post by Yossarian on Nov 6, 2004 14:01:21 GMT -5
Wow...this was really good, Daemonized. The imagery was wonderful, esp. in the second verse. For some reason, although the chorus was really simple, it spoke to me and I thought it was the strongest part of the song, other than
Suicide saving grace screaming grief systematic violator of faith
Once I get my band back together, I want to do a cover of this! :coolface:
Cheers,
Yossarian
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