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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 18, 2004 21:32:21 GMT -5
I wrote this many years ago in high school.. this describes a girls first love..
Hey little girl, all alone in the world Are you ready for your first love and the pain? When the hurt is over you may not ever want to love anyone again.
He is the one who makes your heart burn, But watch yourself do not believe your eyes. Sometimes I love you only leads. To the blood stains on our thies.
Hey little girl, how does it feel to be a woman? Isn’t that what you’ve always dreamed about? And you will see love is not always as it’s supposed to be. Scars of love will not ever come for free.
Now little girl I think you see the story, just hide your scars so no one else will see. We men do not feel these scars till we give our hearts and sometimes princess charming rides off in the night.
And scars of love will never come for free.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jun 19, 2004 14:33:17 GMT -5
awww.. i really liked this piece, mike. its so sad, but honest at the same time. great work. this might be my favourite of yours yet.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 19, 2004 17:33:47 GMT -5
Blushing here..Thank you..
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RobbedofPurity
Dark Initiate
im sorry, i really felt that, you felt so much more
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Post by RobbedofPurity on Jun 19, 2004 19:49:25 GMT -5
Oh my god. i love it. thats how i feel about some stuff thats happened to me recently. thanks for posting it. its awesome.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jun 19, 2004 20:20:30 GMT -5
I never got into the lie to the Female to get her body..I wrote this to ease the pain of a freind in highschool.. As far as fellas lying to females to get sex nothing has changed..in a hundred years it will be the same..I am glad you liked, you are welcome..
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