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Post by Doom on you on Mar 14, 2004 0:11:22 GMT -5
Blood pouring down the stairs Blood coming from my arm Blood flowing over chairs Drowning in my blood THis life is hell Can't go any lower I want to die Let the blood flow over The red is invited as is the black let the rest of the colors go over my back This life is hell Can't go any lower I want to die Let the blood flow over The blade flashin in the air More blood on the ground can't take it anymore let me drown in my blood This life is hell can't go any lower I want to die Let the blood flow over Drowing in blood What bliss what joy Better then mud What fun what ploy? This life was hell Couldn't get lower I wanted to die I got it.......OVER :tongue:
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Post by Forsaken on Mar 31, 2004 21:20:54 GMT -5
Pretty good. Could use a little work here and there, but otherwise it's fine. Good job!
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