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My Life
Dec 16, 2003 16:43:53 GMT -5
Post by Forsaken on Dec 16, 2003 16:43:53 GMT -5
As I sit in my room Everyday I ask myself With tears rolling down my face Does anyone care? Is anyone even there? Are my friends really friends? Yes or no? Am I really their friend? Maybe I should put it all to an end As people bully me around And put me down Even if I have a good intention Good doesn't get you attention Doesn't matter if I go to school And that I'm not a fool It's not enough, no Because smart doesn't make you cool I wish people would talk to me Give me the time of day And not turn away But I'm invisible It doesn't matter to whom I say hello I just melt away like snow I used to be friends With a girl named Katlyn But I ruined that with my mouth I spoke before I stopped to think Maybe I should end it all With an alcoholic drink Or stop breathing Maybe cut my arm bleeding My parents told me That I have a promise in life But I just sit there with a knife Comtemplating suicide I asked my friend Zahara If she thinks that I'm insane Messed up in the brain It really doesn't matter what she has to say Because each cut's another step closer To the vein
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
Posts: 405
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My Life
Dec 16, 2003 18:38:26 GMT -5
Post by Mistress on Dec 16, 2003 18:38:26 GMT -5
Andy, that's painful even to me. I can relate to that completely. I know more of what you go through than you'll ever realize. I'm sorry for insulting you in the past. I'd really like to actually get to know you better if you gave me a chance. It would be quite amusing to see what we could do with both of our writing skills combined...
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My Life
Dec 19, 2003 9:26:02 GMT -5
Post by BlackRainbow on Dec 19, 2003 9:26:02 GMT -5
Be Happy
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somaybeitsme
Dark Initiate
Conformed and Confined, We all bleed with sadness
Posts: 49
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My Life
Dec 21, 2003 2:32:37 GMT -5
Post by somaybeitsme on Dec 21, 2003 2:32:37 GMT -5
i like this
there are some parts that are abit tacky like this part:
"Doesn't matter if I go to school And that I'm not a fool It's not enough, no Because smart doesn't make you cool"
this part just sounds very cliche..
but other then that i really like this it is very personal and real..
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