Post by Evil Amerigo on Oct 25, 2003 13:40:42 GMT -5
NOTE: Okay originally, i wanted to make this a poem. but it turned out that it sounds more like a song... And only when you "read" it a certain way does it produce a certain emotion, otherwise it loses something along the way.
I don't play in any band nor know of any... So if you are part of a band and actually like some of the following you have my permission, nay encouragement to actually utilize to your own means with whatever modification you may want...
Any comments I make will be marked by brackets.
***
[slowly sung/read in a deep gruff tone]
Dark... Like the ignominy
Grey vengence
Is almost yours
Take with me
Your repentence
Nevermore; it is yours
Look into the granite mirror
Where you see my dim visage [Note in here it's meant to be [vis-azh] not [vis-age] or the sound is lost]
Beckon forth for the terror
There you see my visage [same as above]
***
[sudden break in both tone and pace--fast, almost frantic]
Sweeping, flowing through your veins
Oozing pestilence describes your heart
As it darkens, soils and stains
Gaze upon withering worms
As they crawl from the masses
Of decaying flesh--in swarms
***
[tone once more becomes slow almost solemn if you will]
There upon in the masses
Where they writhe
In your throat (it passes) [()--a whisper with a slight echo]
Happiness, like the marrow
Imbibed from your bones
Bow to your Pharaoh
Once again, foolish drones
***
[sudden change in tone once more, this time however instead of a fast and frantic pace, determined powerful and at anormal pace]
As the shadow consumes your heart
And the rivelets of the crimson
Burst from your eyes
Then you'll see how blind you were
As your skull shatters
(Hollow) [()--whisper]
Like your soul
Then your inqiuity is derived from your mind
But how can you?
Look forward from the cage
(And smile)
Rot in there with the others
From whose skulls you drink their blood
Ecstasy from the quaffing
Extinguishes your hope
***
[tone once more slow and solemn]
There you sit and tommorrow
Where sunsets imbibed
There upon with your sorrow
Nevermore; you survived
I don't play in any band nor know of any... So if you are part of a band and actually like some of the following you have my permission, nay encouragement to actually utilize to your own means with whatever modification you may want...
Any comments I make will be marked by brackets.
***
[slowly sung/read in a deep gruff tone]
Dark... Like the ignominy
Grey vengence
Is almost yours
Take with me
Your repentence
Nevermore; it is yours
Look into the granite mirror
Where you see my dim visage [Note in here it's meant to be [vis-azh] not [vis-age] or the sound is lost]
Beckon forth for the terror
There you see my visage [same as above]
***
[sudden break in both tone and pace--fast, almost frantic]
Sweeping, flowing through your veins
Oozing pestilence describes your heart
As it darkens, soils and stains
Gaze upon withering worms
As they crawl from the masses
Of decaying flesh--in swarms
***
[tone once more becomes slow almost solemn if you will]
There upon in the masses
Where they writhe
In your throat (it passes) [()--a whisper with a slight echo]
Happiness, like the marrow
Imbibed from your bones
Bow to your Pharaoh
Once again, foolish drones
***
[sudden change in tone once more, this time however instead of a fast and frantic pace, determined powerful and at anormal pace]
As the shadow consumes your heart
And the rivelets of the crimson
Burst from your eyes
Then you'll see how blind you were
As your skull shatters
(Hollow) [()--whisper]
Like your soul
Then your inqiuity is derived from your mind
But how can you?
Look forward from the cage
(And smile)
Rot in there with the others
From whose skulls you drink their blood
Ecstasy from the quaffing
Extinguishes your hope
***
[tone once more slow and solemn]
There you sit and tommorrow
Where sunsets imbibed
There upon with your sorrow
Nevermore; you survived