BONES AND FLESH OF ME
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Post by BONES AND FLESH OF ME on Oct 12, 2003 14:12:05 GMT -5
When I did see The ring so bright Of water shining glass The wonder of the circle Did comprehend the past
For now my lives before So clear They were not part of me But rather Were they watchful Of my silence By degree
I shall not reach Nor shall I find The darker side Of me But rather shall I Greet the grave, With bones and flesh . Of me.
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Post by Lina Inverse on Oct 12, 2003 21:14:04 GMT -5
"Greet the grave, With bones and flesh"
Very morbid... especially those lines. Good job!
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Oct 14, 2003 15:15:40 GMT -5
awesome rhythm.
i really like your style.. hope to see more from you.
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Post by black jewelled rain on Oct 16, 2003 10:16:36 GMT -5
I agree that that the line 'greet the grave' is my favourite. Very interesting piece of writing. Loved it.
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