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Post by monapentacle666 on Feb 11, 2018 15:40:00 GMT -5
She walks in the shadows of the night all these things are she her blood red lips tantalize and tialate her victims. She dances with the wolfs and swims in blood this beautiful mink of venom and delight will set you ablaze with wondrous desires before draining you of life and blood so come worn down traveler or admier and let her cradle you in her soft arms so that she may drink from you until you are no more.
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Post by Lurker on Feb 25, 2019 18:31:34 GMT -5
Read what you are writing before submitting. Find a structure that helps the reader with the cadence, the way you want it read. Here is some help:
"She walks in the shadows of the night Her blood red lips tantalize her victims
She dances with the wolves Swims in blood This beautiful mink of venom and delight will set you ablaze with wondrous desires Draining you of life
Come worn down traveler Let her cradle you in her soft arms And be no more"
At that - this is cliche, but a noble beginning. Don't stop writing. You will look back years from now and see how much you have grown.
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