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Post by twistedangel on Jun 19, 2017 1:45:53 GMT -5
The first part i like a lot...the second involved a lot of Googling words. Dunno why but i like to think this write is of rememberance rather than a dream...maybe is both? Am still picking away at the last strophe...back to google them a reread :-)
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Post by twistedangel on Jun 20, 2017 0:14:34 GMT -5
Big words don't distract. As words are writers tools, the more you have the better equipped the writer, especially when we talk of avoiding the dread 'cliche' lol
Not understanding a word is on the reader not the writer imo
The reason am still picking at the last strophe is cos am thinking it holds more weight to it than I actually understand at the mo. I see as a moment of clarity, of all that's gone before an maybe of things to come...before it disappears like some mirage. But...is it a sad thing or a good thing...or is it a case of being neither? of being..it is wot it is, a hard truth?
Or am totally way off the mark lol :-)
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