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Post by twistedangel on May 21, 2016 15:08:23 GMT -5
Iron hit ground with dull thump Symbolism ending war
Yet blood must still flow Traitors guilt
Spikes will have their heads Nobles fall for noble causes
Has ever a king slept soundly ?
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Post by LonelyForsaken on May 22, 2016 0:02:38 GMT -5
The second "yet" in S2, L1 must go. Either one actually. Despite the subject matter it's quick and cute. LOL
"Has ever a king slept soundly ?"
I think it depends on the king but my guess is that most of them were quite content, right up until they realized they where about to loose their head. I think most were probably poisoned and never saw it coming though. Not all kings where bad and some where loved by the people. Can't make everyone happy though.
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Post by twistedangel on May 22, 2016 2:19:01 GMT -5
OMG WTF wos I thinking LOL...yeah 1 to many
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