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exhale
Feb 17, 2016 5:10:23 GMT -5
Post by twistedangel on Feb 17, 2016 5:10:23 GMT -5
LOL ok back to Google for me
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exhale
Feb 17, 2016 22:42:41 GMT -5
Post by LonelyForsaken on Feb 17, 2016 22:42:41 GMT -5
It's good, clever, and creative, but you are either the most well read person I have ever met anywhere or you really know how to use a thesaurus. I don't know anyone who could read this without running to Google or Webster. "Recherché" LOL
Overall I'm left feeling torn but given the abrupt change and finality of the last strophe I think torn is the point. Clever.
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