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Post by twistedangel on Feb 11, 2016 4:17:30 GMT -5
Am gonna have to do some major googling to even begin to see wotsoever under this piece...I thought at the mo me stupidity stops me understanding this...I find it fascinating. Deffo be returning to this
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Feb 14, 2016 15:29:29 GMT -5
I think I can see why you play this one down. It's not a great invocator of emotion or revelation. What it seems to be is a really good exercise of word choices and painting imagery with them. I see a solid pic of a dilapidated grain silo and the plight of the American farmer. It seems as though you started with something much more profoundly personal in mind when you began. " Singularity drawn into scalene depths, thoughtlessly dismissed."But after that the connection becomes external. Overall, a strong forgotten in time feeling. I love your word choices and combinations lately. " shambling winter gear on loan,"I enjoyed reading this a lot. Thanks
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Post by twistedangel on Feb 17, 2016 5:06:52 GMT -5
totally Googled the crap outta this...an reckon LF idea of this is a very good one...ermm if am honest soo glad he did cos even tho I found meaning to the words choices I still would struggle with it love seeing new words, an enjoy finding out their meanings I do see a farm at night, not abandoned but at rest now the harvest is in
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